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It might be ... !

As a thumbnail, the pic is immense! Looks like it could be a fantasy illustration!

At full size, the figures in the foreground and that giant wizard could really do with some tidying up, and needs some extra detailing and textures.

Excellent stuff tho, worth a vote of 5.

Kamikaye responds:

Thx :) Its a rather old one and I might make a reworked version of this ,your advice will help here :)

Best collection of sigs I've seen

I'll give you 10 cos all 3 packs are sweeeeeeet.
But I've shifted them to your user page, like Legolass said. Sorry :(

Marsupial responds:

its allright i was gonna do it myself anyway

oh shit your art is pretty great too i just looked

Wuhhuhhuhhh

Fucking A.
-The setting is a beaut, I love the leaves up high and on the floor (altho they're different?) and the illumination of the scene.
-The character has beautiful costume, and colours and really creative, the leg slicing through the monster!
-And that monster! One of your grey sacks of muscle, I love the freakish face, the claw like hand, the ridge of claws and that out of place human arm - which reminds me of a supernatural photo that creeps me right the fuck out. I love it.

Long ass review.
Summary: original fantasy, great composition, great characters.

Phew.

sucho responds:

yes, he is one of MY GREY SACKS OF MUSCLE. the monster was totally an afterthought, i just basically looked at how much room i had to fill and threw in all sorts of stupid monster cliches to fill it out.

yea. i know the leaves are wrong but it felt so very right.

Lined paper

In all your submissions, the lined paper ruins it :(
Grab yourself a sketchpad and doodle on that ;)

You could prob develop your scenes more and make mushroom cityscapes, or interesting mushroom architecture.
Your character's could have a wee bit more personality to them; bring them up to par with the one floating on leaves.

Finally, watch your studies ;)

Zepizza responds:

Well I made it all in my classes, that's why it has the lines...
I'm sketching another one, I thinks it has a little more personality, but this one was intended to make a "dumb group", everybody with the almost same expression.

Thanks for the tips...and relax, my grades are fine =D

Arg

Looks like you've held your nerve with the inking, as the two smart buggers below me have noticed the tones are well controlled, and overall it looks tight.

Brill job, fella.

Art Portal Mod here

There's nothing stolen about this pic.

If you take the time to compare the vid you'll notice Nekow uses a lot more dark colour than the vid.

To artist, would be good to link reference so that we can compare what you did well and what not so well (like your choice of colours). And avoid these "i think its stolen" reviews.

Nekow responds:

many thanks for understanding

action

That's just adorable. Love the dinky hat, the colours and that fat rocket on his back. pewpewpew

Savory responds:

Makes you want to furnish the nearest cat! Am I right?

Review

I like how you've drawn the face really well, mainly the lips and eyes, and the patterns, from what I can see, look great.

I think you should read a tutorial about drawing hair and make some brushes up. As it is, the hair doesn't look strand-like, and more like bin bag plastic.
Also the white highlights on the face kill the details of the tatoos; far too bright.

Keep it up tho, fella, you've got many good submissions.

Praise

Dammit Johan! Get 3 more of your stuffs in the portal! Pronto!

Nice colours, good shading, first class use of brushes.
Needs a few more details, seems rather plain, but I'm guessing you're not fussed.

JohanL responds:

Yes!
I thank you big delicious turkey on a stick, I will upload more :)
yeah I should work on this more, but I'm lazy, plus I kinda like the scruffy look of it. Anyways I'm glad you like it!

Hot stuff.

Brilliant use of colours.
Nice details.

Recommended for art portal; submit another and some lucky user gets to scout you.

Kero-the-boy-killer responds:

Thanks~

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