TurkeyOnAStick's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Level 49]

Damn she's a sexy chick

Ahh i see what you did there.Think you've picked a great idea for lvl 49.
I like the eyes, the hand holding the arrow, the shading on the knees, and the imaginative way you've supported her knockers.
Reading Kagoe's review, I now get the vibrant background, but the tree silhouettes are a bit dominating.

Great stuff, fella.

LegolaSS responds:

come on... level 49 was made for her!... i have to agree.. the eyes and hand holding the arrow are my favourt parts, i wanted her to fade out a bit at the bottom... but i rather like it how it stand *no pun intended*... of course... been all natural and all... you need to find a natural way of support... dont want them getting in the way when your about to fire an arrow.. :S... i just quickly whipped out some old symbols from animations i were working on, gave them the neutral green tint and wacked in the green newgrounds aura as a background behind it all... i wanted to make sure that the aura theme stood out as well as her... but yeah... i could have toned down the green... mabey adding a white mist over the top so it wasnt so bright... something to keep in mind for the future!...

[Dazed]

yea boii

Love the straight fur and the ring-like bark in this.
Good stuff.

UnderARock responds:

those branches seem to be gettin the kids all hot n bothered now a days

[Skarab]

Looks great

I'm not fond of the large gaps between tread of the tyre, and the spikes (I think?) on the exhaust (I think?) look out of place to the rest of the sleek, glossy model.

That said, I think it's a quality bike concept!

[Machine/MeMonsters]

So nice

I love the cables running into the arms and legs, and the polygonal machinery.
My main attraction is you've kept it in pen, and the hatching gives it a great quality.Glad it's in dark grey/white, too.

Only qualm is the speech font is so stylish that its unreadable! But the "Blip bloop blap" is clear enough for me.

IDuDe responds:

It says:"This Is Some Funky Ass Dream!"
But yeah I may of gone a little bit crazy with the font (I was going for the graffiti tag style thing)

[Could it be ... ?]

It might be ... !

As a thumbnail, the pic is immense! Looks like it could be a fantasy illustration!

At full size, the figures in the foreground and that giant wizard could really do with some tidying up, and needs some extra detailing and textures.

Excellent stuff tho, worth a vote of 5.

Kamikaye responds:

Thx :) Its a rather old one and I might make a reworked version of this ,your advice will help here :)

[Sig Pack 3]

Best collection of sigs I've seen

I'll give you 10 cos all 3 packs are sweeeeeeet.
But I've shifted them to your user page, like Legolass said. Sorry :(

Marsupial responds:

its allright i was gonna do it myself anyway

oh shit your art is pretty great too i just looked

[Mushroom City 5]

Lined paper

In all your submissions, the lined paper ruins it :(
Grab yourself a sketchpad and doodle on that ;)

You could prob develop your scenes more and make mushroom cityscapes, or interesting mushroom architecture.
Your character's could have a wee bit more personality to them; bring them up to par with the one floating on leaves.

Finally, watch your studies ;)

Zepizza responds:

Well I made it all in my classes, that's why it has the lines...
I'm sketching another one, I thinks it has a little more personality, but this one was intended to make a "dumb group", everybody with the almost same expression.

Thanks for the tips...and relax, my grades are fine =D

[Self Portrait]

Arg

Looks like you've held your nerve with the inking, as the two smart buggers below me have noticed the tones are well controlled, and overall it looks tight.

Brill job, fella.