TurkeyOnAStick's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Saw Bitch Ragebot]

eep

Epic job man; really like the axial layout coupled with the "halos", and the colours running from hot to cold.

Kamikaye responds:

Thx :D woho someone noticed !

[Awesome-Soup]

For a second...

... I thought the space for reviews was about writing reviews. Not for being a whiny bitch... Not to say this isn't a sick nasty idea. But seriously? Overuse of ellipsis?

... Whatever...

[Robot Day 2]

Aye

Really nice; that lush red goes really well against the blue, and I love those vivid brush strokes.

Well played.

[Centipede]

Cor

Nice colours,
Nice shading,
and look at those wee little feet! lololol

The yellow links inbetween the red plates look like they're running across the body at the back, yet diagonally across the head? The stomach plates are misaligning as well.

You've made a good effort, but I think you need to think a tiny bit more about how the textures are going to change as the go across the 3D body.

Love your recent colouring, keep it up.

[Ling Xiunyou]

You what?

Nudity to boost score?
Either you're just echoing what the guy a few reviews down said, or you're a tool.

Think suwako said it perfectly, but it looks like you'd rather be blinded by dumb praise.

I'm quite frankly surprised this piece of guff came from a guy with decent submissions.

Tombstoned666 responds:

yeah i know.............yeah i am echoing and yeah i am a tool
and nudity does boost score on this site!!( tool ) fo shaw
suwako did say it perfectly im not blinded.. although i do like dumb praise
cheers for the review XD

[Robot Day '10: Peace]

Yup

Yeah, I agree with Rananas. Tne linework and shading is great, and I was looking forward to what you're going to produce. I really like the mottled brown colours you've used as well. Now I think of it, the bobots in the back remind me of Goya.

However, it's pretty difficult to distinguish the body of the robot and the bird from the surroundings, simply because there's not enough contrast. Nae's solution is about right.

Also it's very difficult for robots to connvey emotion, since their features don't move. However, you've done a great job with the pose on this one!

Fifty-50 responds:

Yay! Thanks for the review, Toas! I really appreciate your advice! Because it's really rare for anyone to review my art, especially mods.

[chinese zodiac]

Brilliant

Without a doubt one of my favourite pics of yours. The patterns on those critters are gorgeous.

[PM-Secretary Nano V.01c]

Great stuff

The plate edging is fabulous, but I'm in love with your simple palette on this one, particularly round the head.

I'll prob request an art trade from you soonish.

BizarroJoe responds:

Gosh, just give me a hug, Turkey... <3
In both two Art Trades I've done until now, I've had a lot of troubles thinking about what should I request to my partner, as silly as it may sound! But, in your case, I know exactly what to ask from you since a loooong time ago...
Drive safely!

[kitty war sneak peak]

I'm sorry ...

... but I like this WIP far too much.
Now every moment this comic isn't finished and on the art portal/on a website I'm going to be overwhelmed with misery.

You bastards.

Got some character sheets? They look awesome.

dommi-fresh responds:

bloody hell we better get cracking

[City Block Render]

3D stuff

This is more a review based off DeschRTG's review. Although I won't fault, I think a lot of the appeal of this pic how cartoonish and fun the building is, and the use of vibrant colours.

I would say over-consideration of the textures would mean the pic is attempting realism, which would not only destroy the fun aspect, but would highlight other areas which require further work.

Since I'm considering this a cartoonish 3D model, I'd say that'd it be nice to give some individuality to the building, since it's people that give it personality. Say clothes lines and flower boxes from a couple of window sills, grafitti, hop scoth squares, etc. It could give a clue to what kind of neighbourhood the builiding is in.

... and architecturally (unless I'm wrong), shouldn't there be a fire escape door on each level, as opposed to only the top? Also the Wacom ad board would mean that 1 or 2 of the apartments have no windows.